I played this today and I really like what you have going for this VN so far! I think the writing is what really drew me in, you're really good at portraying and painting a picture of Juniper's thoughts and state of mind, and the dialogue is really good too. And of course I love Sue already, even though we've just met her.
I look forward to seeing a continuation of this in the future!! Very good stuff :D
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I played this today and I really like what you have going for this VN so far! I think the writing is what really drew me in, you're really good at portraying and painting a picture of Juniper's thoughts and state of mind, and the dialogue is really good too. And of course I love Sue already, even though we've just met her.
I look forward to seeing a continuation of this in the future!! Very good stuff :D